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Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Another side of clouds...

The dimming Sun;
the covering clouds;
The running nun;
the hiding prouds.
They come. They come.

The approaching shack;
the threatening glare.
The unblemished black;
the ripping snare.
They come. They come.

The godly fight;
the titian clash.
The situation tight.
Smaller vanquish flash.
They come. They come.

The thunderous sound;
the erected hair.
The frightful pound.
the pissing mare.
They come. They come.

The harsh gale,
the creaking oaks.
The people pale,
the palpable shocks.
They come. They come.

The crying child.
The frightened mother.
The fever mild,
the sleeping father.
They come. They come.

The raining fast;
The pelting harsh.
The seeds cast
turn into marsh.
They come. They come.

The waiting farmers;
the bathing boy.
The God's dreamers
in dancing joy.
They come. They come.

The umbrellas over,
the raincoats on.
Life stops never-
dusk or dawn.
They come. They come.

The parched farm;
the drought land-
Moved by charm.
Rains outside band.

The people wait
for another day,
when opens gate
clouds rain may.
They came, they came.
Never water came.

8 comments:

Confusion personified said...

I hate rains ! cant tolerate them !!
Nice poem though..very passionate.

neeraj said...

oye, kavi...tu bin piye piyakad lagta hai....
suna tha,"poets write under the effect of alcohol"...aaj lagta hai, jhoot nahi boltein...

prashslash said...

Ahhh .. deep emotions... nyc nyc ... keep it goin

ScarletTd1ar1es said...

oh mahn....you got me reeling...gloomy...gud...

workhard said...

Good poem!!!!!

nicely clubbed emotions


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VJ Sophie said...

AAha, nice one! I simply love rain!

Shruthi said...

these lines suit the weather we have in Bangalore :) I like your style of writing.. keep those posts coming :)

sp.ajay said...

@work hard: thank you...


@vjsophie:here in Hamirpur winter rains make the weather extremely chilly. you don't even desire anything apart from a coffee or a sleep...

@shruthi:I have never been to Bangalore, but surely I will one day;i had written the last verse keeping drought areas of orissa in mind; thanks for dropping by...